I found it peculiar that the children of such young ages (7
and 9) wanted to see the hanging of someone. You wrote that the boy seemed to
have a natural animosity in his eyes, and his little sister was purely a mimic
of him, but I think that death is something that would still puzzle children at
this age. Are you trying to show the vivid reality of how acceptable everyone has
become of hatred, crime, and even death?
I absolutely love this O’Brien character. You gave him a
fascinating aura in the beginning and I am really glad that you brought him up
again! With the passing moment (only a moment!) of naked truth between O’Brien
and Winston, I felt that he was going to play a much bigger role in the book.
Now he is back again, and the story complicates itself in deciding the blueprint
of O’Brien. Is he good or bad? I think that he will be a key point to something
later on but so far I really don’t have many guesses in the direction that this
will take us.
I know it’s early to say but this had been the best part of
the book for me. A mysterious voice appears into Winston’s dream saying, “We
shall meet in the place where there in no darkness.” And then to later have
Winston identify that the voice is O’Briens. Brilliant! Are you referring to
“no darkness” as being literal or figuratively: as if in a tunnel or when times
aren’t overbearing by a dark government?
Here comes Oceania again, tantalizing my thoughts like
pierced needles. Of course, you don’t say much more than a sentence or two,
dropping subtle hints. Now I’ve discovered that Oceania is a friend. Not much
more. My guess is that Oceania is the name of the country that London now
resides.
I really enjoy that I’ve only read thirty pages that have
taken place over a few hours, and I feel like I have been traveling with
Winston for years! At one point, Winston went back to writing in his journal
and I was so warped in time that I forgot only a few minutes had passed,
realistically in his time. Great job writing out his though process. I am
completely mesmerized with Winston’s memories. (Thanks God they’re aren’t near
as sadistic as the Two Minutes Hate!)
There was a lot more explanation of how the government is
ran. They go to extremes to have complete control. Big Brother is
rewriting/remaking history every new day and they are having their workers
personally do the jobs for them. Winston works at the Ministry of Truth and
handles rewriting history for the newspaper. Books are recalled; people who
have “gone missing” and died are pronounced an “unperson.” This means that they
never existed and any evidence of them existing is destroyed. Winston’s
neighbors solo job is to erase evidence of dead people, even if it was her
husband. You have gone to some extravagant lengths to make this story feel
feasible.